Another Write India story with the prompt given highlighted in Bold below.
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Prompt given by Preethi Shenoy
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Prompt given by Preethi Shenoy
She willed herself to not
check her phone to see if he had replied. It had been about three days now. She
hated that she was constantly checking his 'last seen at' status and yes, he
had logged in just five minutes ago. Yet she couldn't stop herself. This
sinking feeling to find absolutely no communication from him was becoming
unbearable, almost torturous.
And then, just as she sat down
in her chair, her phone vibrated. With her heart thudding in her ear, she
unlocked her phone and stared at the screen. Finally! It was his message.
But when she opened it and
read it, she nearly stopped breathing. She didn't know if he was joking or not.
What was this?
She looked at the watch he had
gifted her this Valentine’s Day. The beautiful pink watch in the shape of heart
had a beautiful girl in her white wedding gown and a handsome guy in his neatly
ironed brown suit with a red tie, for the minute and hours’ hand. Every one
hour in a day, the two would be on top of each other and exchange their love
for each other. How cute, she thought and once again felt proud of the romantic
thoughts of him and kissed at the treasured gift of hers and felt safest when
it was tied around her wrist. But when again the message flashed in her mind, she
began pondering over it and thought if she had she been too stubborn this time.
Should she have been little bit more flexible, she wondered.
They had earlier also had many
arguments, but their mutual love for one another had always won over their
arguments. Her thoughts went back to the days when they practiced the whole day
in the music club of their college. She was the college troupe’s lead female
singer and he the drummer. Music brought them together. They spoke to each
other about music for long hours. They were seen all over the college campus
talking about the Raga’s Thalas, Keerthanas and the musicians. Gossip mongers
were doing the rounds, scribbling on the bathrooms about the affair between the
two, when there was actually nothing of that sort in their minds. Without their
knowledge slowly as the days passed, the topics crossed the border line and
started becoming more personal. College cultural events always laid special
milestones in their life. While planning for college cultural events,
invariably there used to be heated exchange on song, singer and band selection,
song sequencing and he always after many rounds of war of words, not only
agreed to her suggestions, but also persuaded others to fall in line. This was
what made her fall in love with him. She feels happy even now, when she remembers
the day, she herself wrote in the college canteen walls - her name followed by
his name Gita Raghav. Also it was one of the college cultural events day, when
he had proposed to her and she gave her consent.
The final year college
cultural meet was the place where her parents met his family and mutually
agreed to get them both married. The day is green in her memories, when the
whole college was gossiping about this meeting. Really she was far ahead of her
times, she thought now with pride.
She remembered the days when
they started applying for jobs with a greater aim of settling down with each
other at the earliest as this was one of the conditions laid down by the
parents. She wanted to settle down in Chennai, as she was born and brought up
there, while he wanted to move to Bangalore. Again the heated discussions on
where to settle down. Fortunately she got a great offer with a big MNC in
Chennai, but as luck would have it, he got a job with a company in Bangalore. Finally
it was he who forgo the offer to find an alternative in Chennai and shifted to
Chennai to pursue her dreams. Once they were settled in jobs, a small wedding
ceremony was organized, which united them and opened them the doors to start
and live the life they wanted to live. The journey had been beautiful since
then. He treated her like a princesses always and still treats her so. But why
this reply, was what worried her.
They lived a cherished life in
Singara Chennai. Both of them took a joint loan and purchased a small flat and
named it TARA, which was a combination of GiTA and RAghav. She cursed herself now for being so career oriented
all through and wondered why she was so hard in pursuing her professional
dreams. She re-winded the days when she would endlessly sit to pursue higher
studies to quickly reach her way to glory, while he would assist with the house
work, take the kids to the park nearby for a play and attend to his call of
duty as well. A well rounded person, truly who nicely balanced all the roles he
was assigned by the Almighty.
There were always fights over who would prepare the breakfast, lunch, dinner, who would attend the parent-teachers meeting, who would baby sit, who would do the grocery shopping and all the time, she managed to win the fight. There were times she wanted to evade these and there were times, she wanted to do these chores, in either case she won, or rather, he lost for her. But why this message now. She was almost in tears, as the message lingered in her mind again and again.
There were always fights over who would prepare the breakfast, lunch, dinner, who would attend the parent-teachers meeting, who would baby sit, who would do the grocery shopping and all the time, she managed to win the fight. There were times she wanted to evade these and there were times, she wanted to do these chores, in either case she won, or rather, he lost for her. But why this message now. She was almost in tears, as the message lingered in her mind again and again.
Though she was a working women
and a strong personality, she always looked up-to him for guidance and never
went anywhere without him. She was poor in sense of direction and always lost
her way, when she attempted alone anywhere. He also felt satisfied to accompany
his darling anywhere anytime and never felt it like a task that needed to be
completed. He was secretly yearning for any situation just to be with her and
spend time with her. She was his lucky charm and left all decisions to her. Even
very small decisions on where to purchase rice, or which cake to select for birth
day party or what to order when they go to a restaurant, everything was decided
by her and there was a happy consent from him. He had so much in love with her,
that he would even wear, eat and do what was decided by her for him. The dress
he wears, the car he drives, the paper he reads, the cellphone he uses, is
chosen by her. Something hurt him deeply when she didn’t make a choice for him
and the same feeling of hurt, was what she felt, when he chose something for
himself. Really the two were a romantic couple who got on like house on fire.
There was nothing which
stopped their romantic journey. Kids, Career, Money, Relatives everything
brought in more problems between them, but love prevailed. Both of them had
great understanding for each other and were unstoppable in their pursuit for
ultimate glory as far as love life was concerned. Each problem that came in the
journey, helped them strengthen their love, prove others and to themselves how
deeply in love they were with each other. But this message, was not what she
expected from him. Has something gone wrong. She wondered again and again.
This was the first time, she
was away from him and that too this far. There were many situations in their
life journey, when they faced the question of relocating and staying apart from
each other for a while. But they faced all such situations boldly and never
parted from each other. Career progression, kids, fame, money, kids’ education
nothing could part them, even for a small period. Now what was she doing? She
feared the world might mistake, if she refused to come down. Since due to
various financial reasons, he could not accompany him. But she only persuaded
him also saying that she needs to come here for this short trip as otherwise
the world would talk ill of them. But now she wondered, why was she here, when
he was there? She cursed herself for taking this decision. She must not have
left him alone. She must have been with him only, irrespective of what the world
says. She cried loud and thought to herself what blunder she had committed.
Will he never pardon her? Was he angry? Was he never going to talk to me?
Million fearful thoughts ran on her mind. She tried calling his number, but
failed from the day she landed here. No one was helping her to call, as
probably they all thought things would slowly settle down. They didn’t want to
aggravate this loneliness feeling by making them talk again and again. Perhaps
they were all scared that, if both of them spoke, they would change their minds
and come together again. Everyone is selfish and more interested in self.
Now that she read his message,
she was desperate to call him, but call never went through. This WhatsApp
seemed to be a one way channel and she never used it earlier. She never felt
the need to know about all this, as for her she had taken for granted that she
would be with him and he would anyway know all this.
In the meanwhile he was also
crying to himself for having taken the decision to send her so far away, that
too when he needed her the most. He purposefully did not reply to her message
and that too after three days when decided to reply, gave her a harsh reply
telling her just a single word NO. He cried to himself and was going through a
pain as if some vital body part of his was cutout from his body. The
togetherness that they were enjoying as a couple cannot be described by words.
She couldn’t take it anymore.
Whatever the world thinks, she decided that she would act, as directed by her
heart, her heart which was overflowing with love for him always. She opened the
door and came out and told her daughter that she couldn’t do this and wanted to
return back to India at once. She told her that she was happy to see her
grandchild, but was somehow finding it difficult to stay back as promised for
another six months to be with her and take care of the baby. He daughter was
taken aback, as they had shelled huge bucks to bring her hear after having
prolonged discussions with her and him, to help her out on this. But having
seen her parents from the beginning, she was happily surprised when her mom,
consented to come with her. She was always expecting the unexpected from her
mom and this was yet another example, as was her consent to come with her.
She could hear her son-in-law
talk cheaply about her sincere, mutual, affection for her husband. But she
didn’t mind it and was only looking forward to fly back to India, as she only
knew that a NO from him, meant as YES to her question on whether he was
expecting her to return back to India in next flight. For a moment though the
NO shocked her, she slowly realized what a balanced person he was. He was under
tremendous pressure to keep her wife, daughter, son-in-law and the grandchild
happy and the only was he could do it was to suffer all by himself. His noble
sacrifice to send her with her daughter’s family and be alone, might not sound
a big deal to many out there, who see this happening always. But for the kind
of life they lived and the love they poured on each other and the affection
that flowed between them, this was huge sacrifice. Her daughter understood
this, admist the various mocks from her husband and his family, who failed to
understand what true love is. But she knew that her Mom and her Dad lived a life
which was beyond comparison with anyone and there could be no greater
punishment that separating them in their old age, as they cannot live without
each other.
She was thankful that god
provided this opportunity to once again discover the love she shared with her
husband. She was waiting for the flight to land and reach home. She had not
told him, that she would be coming back. So she was waiting to see the surprise
in his face while she would press the calling bell. She quickly collected the
luggage and took the call taxi and hurried back home. It was early morning
hours when she entered the apartment premises and found the lights of TARA
where on. She thought to herself, how he might have felt lonely and didn’t get
a sleep and was awake so early in the morning. When she pressed the calling
bell, he opened the door with a hot cup of filter coffee, which she liked most
and asked told her” Just now I checked that the flight is on time and that it
landed safely. You must be tired, have your favorite filter coffee first”
Tears rolled out of her eyes
and his too. Their each move was known to each other and while she flew back
home after reading a NO reply, he was waiting for her to come back, after
sending a NO answer to her question asking, if she needs to return back. This
is true love, which is beyond words, beyond distance, beyond facial
expressions, beyond anything else in the world. It flows between hearts of two
people united by love and who live as a single soul.
They both hugged each other
and did not bother on mocking world around them, who mocked at their love,
saying both of them wanted to romance in this age, when they actually had to
attend to the grandchildren. No stopping true LOVE.